Christmas Morning *Haiku*

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By jonmcclusk

Presents lacking wrap

Eyes wide open, laying hushed

I watch the sunrise

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ytsenoh Level 7 Commenter 4 months ago

Your haiku was just so lovely. The image you selected went along with your language perfectly. Nicely done! Awesome and thumbs up.

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phdast7 Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Very nicely done. Thankfully, I was able to sleep as all was wrapped. but you captured that moment (and we have all been there) perfectly. Blesed Christmas.

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jonmcclusk Hub Author 4 months ago

Thank you bother for your comments and I wish you a Merry Christmas as well.

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geetbhim Level 1 Commenter 4 months ago

Lovely haiku,thanks for sharing.

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